Update to PARALLELS – prologue

Happened to know how to improve my book – there must be PROLOGUE!
There is a really messed up perception in the beginning and as you follow, it takes a bit of time to make all sink in, therefore it requires prologue.

Something that is TOTALLY AND ABSOLUTELY needed, gives a bit of insights and lets you get a gist of WTF this is going to be about.

From what I have created – I absolutely love the prologue.
It really gives a great vibe, it translucently shades the story in an imaginative colour that is required and does not really spoil a thing. Maybe it does trigger the question of “What the heck?” – but that is what i was going for.

Well, shall update this mofo now in both INKITT and Kindle Amazon… so that there is more to love. (Hopefully.)

And now, yes, there is PROLOGUE to the book – check the links to read it!

Feel free to say how good or rubbish this story is – criticism is what makes it better!

Thank you!

“Parallels” book       INKITT Link –  https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/66844?

“Parallels” book      Kindle Amazon UK link – https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B01KI4JS28

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Mischief lust behind the counter

This makes all so dirtied…
Sullied finger one by one enter the hot personal space.
It’s hot here, wet, her breathing abrupt.
Music is loud, it tries to cover this mischief.
A great amount of rock, blasting madly.
This is end of shift in the cafe, there is none left,
doors closed, lights off, just two left in there –
hiding up, behind the counter,
her body bent, his leaning over. Continue reading