Happened to know how to improve my book – there must be PROLOGUE!
There is a really messed up perception in the beginning and as you follow, it takes a bit of time to make all sink in, therefore it requires prologue.
Something that is TOTALLY AND ABSOLUTELY needed, gives a bit of insights and lets you get a gist of WTF this is going to be about.
From what I have created – I absolutely love the prologue.
It really gives a great vibe, it translucently shades the story in an imaginative colour that is required and does not really spoil a thing. Maybe it does trigger the question of “What the heck?” – but that is what i was going for.
Well, shall update this mofo now in both INKITT and Kindle Amazon… so that there is more to love. (Hopefully.)
And now, yes, there is PROLOGUE to the book – check the links to read it!
Feel free to say how good or rubbish this story is – criticism is what makes it better!
“Parallels” book INKITT Link – https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/66844?
“Parallels” book Kindle Amazon UK link – https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B01KI4JS28